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I'm desperate for you by MrsCullen I'm desperate for you by MrsCullen
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    This is the air I breathe
    This is the air I breathe
    Your presence living in me
    Your very word spoken to me

    And I, I'm desperate for you (I'm desperate for you)
    And I, I'm lost without you (Lost without you)
    And I, I'm desperate for you (I'm desperate for you)
    And I, I'm lost without you (I'm lost without you)
    (I'm lost without you, lost without you)

    This is the air I breathe
    This is the air I breathe
    Your presence living in me.




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    Thanks very much for the support as well. It means always a lot. :blackrose: :heart:
    Feel free to comment and :+fav:



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    © MrsCullen 2009 - Alice Pini.
    All rights reserved.
    My work does not belong to the public domain, not to use it without my written permission.


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This is quite beautiful Alice! :glomp:

The soft, smooth effect that you have given her is what struck me first. The look of longing in her face and eyes really reflects the title "I'm Desperate for You".

This piece is technically quite well done. Something tiny that caught my eyes was her hairline, where it seems as if the skin almost faces away into the hair - I'm not sure if this was your intention but it seems slightly unrealistic to me.

Lastly, I enjoy how you rotated the image the way you did. For some reason that I can't explain, it adds to the feeling of longing, and - at least for me - draws attention to the eyes, which now seem to be staring directly upwards in hope.

Overall, great image, and I would love to see more from you of this general category.

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Luke
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At first glace, the eyes catch my attention also with the pose of the model's hands on her neck and chest definately captures the emotion in this piece of art. This emotional value in this work and also I have noticed in many other works you have created definately give the piece of art a big impact. This captured emotion here is what captivates people. They can relate to it somehow. It tells a story for everyone. :aww:

The black cloth material and the wrinkled texture she lies on is very nice. The colours and mood make it feel somewhat oldfashioned. This gives it a nice warm feel to the final work.

I can also see the improvement you make on doing the "beauty touches" and techniques in the model and her skin, reducing some redness and dark shadows in her skin as well has birthmarks or blemishes. You create your works and your models flawless! This is definately something I notice many photomanipulators do not achieve but you do. Wonderful work Alice. You really do achieve perfection, each and every time. It's beautiful :rose: :heart:
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Den-Lilla-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
I featured this wonderful picture here: [link]
Hope you don't mind! If you do just send me a note and I'll remove it immediately! Thank you! :)
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:iconmrscullen:
MrsCullen Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you so much :love:
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Den-Lilla-Rose Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
My pleasure! :)
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Gypsy-Stock Featured By Owner May 13, 2009
This is beautiful! Thank you for using my stock :heart:
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MrsCullen Featured By Owner May 14, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you :aww:
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noorichanwazhere Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2009
Very pretty, love how you positioned the camera :P
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MrsCullen Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:aww:
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noorichanwazhere Featured By Owner May 5, 2009
:)
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a3t3rnum Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
featured [link] :iconteamoplz:
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MrsCullen Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:heart:
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GloamingHour Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Gorgeous..Very warm tone of colors that makes it look adorable..:heart:
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MrsCullen Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you :hug:
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Green-Woman Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009
beautiful, corresponds well with the title.
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MrsCullen Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you :aww:
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Lady-Symphonia Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009  Professional
O.o

its amazing dear
have a lot of emotions..
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MrsCullen Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you my dear :glomp:
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Stapic Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
gorgeous! Stunning :D
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:iconmrscullen:
MrsCullen Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you dear :glomp:
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DarkGirlDrawings Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
this is awesome. :) i agree that the rotation of this was perfectly done and fits perfectly.
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MrsCullen Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you :hug:
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DarkGirlDrawings Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009  Professional Traditional Artist
aww u are very welcome
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NakedTruth06 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Professional Photographer
pretty
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MrsCullen Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you :aww:
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Pola-444 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009
absolutely gorgeous. really like the tone/feel of this piece :heart:
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MrsCullen Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you :D
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Pola-444 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2009
you're welcome
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TalviEnkeli Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Professional General Artist
It's such wonderful!! :deviation:
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MrsCullen Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you sweetie :heart:
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TalviEnkeli Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Professional General Artist
No problem :)
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pacificmist Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009
Beautiful. Great expression and lighting.
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MrsCullen Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you so much :aww:
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CSnyder Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009
lots of emotion and very nice tones
lovely image
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MrsCullen Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thank you :aww:
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CSnyder Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2009
welcome:hug:
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